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    Posted: 17 November 2005 at 11:52am


Decided to do a proper room, C+C please.
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2005 at 12:52pm
Ooh, pretty nice. I like the wood textures 
Wouldn't really know what to give crits on though.
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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2005 at 1:02pm
Glad you like it, I'm going to submit if I get more good comments.
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Quote Brian the Great Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2005 at 1:10pm
I looove the wood textures too. They give the whole piece a nice professional feeling.

I would change te black lines on the inside some colour if I were you, but that's just a matter of taste. You could also spice up the wall with some texture, since it's a little bland right now. Other than that, great job!
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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2005 at 1:15pm
Yeah I didnt know what to add to the walls and I have no idea what kind of texture, glad you like the wood though
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Quote alkaline Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2005 at 2:26pm
your room is pretty cool 


But to me the blanket looks a tad bit flat, dunno, it may just be me
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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2005 at 2:43pm
Hehe I'm still new with cloth and stuff.

And it looks better than the one I didnt post lol.

I submited it.


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Quote Raylborn Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 10:50am
Very sexy, howd you do the wood?
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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 12:40pm
I just drew it hehe. glad you like it :).
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Quote Meyu Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 7:22pm
Each individual one by one? Or did you copy and paste haha. I like it
though, good work.
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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 21 November 2005 at 2:59am
If you look close on the main page using the zoom you will see each is different.
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Quote Halcyon Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2005 at 4:52pm
Very nice.

But wall is a little boring.

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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 19 December 2005 at 5:29am
Thank you, and yes I know the walls are plain hehe.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2005 at 2:07am
I'd suggest changing the color on some of the black outlines of the furniture so it's not so overbearing. :P But overall, well done! Great wood grain texture!
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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2005 at 7:28am
Perhaps, I did a little test trying this out but didnt get it looking how I wanted, maybe I will try again.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 20 December 2005 at 9:14am
*nods* If you'd like but I think this model's good, just without the black lines.
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