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Quote kallum Replybullet Topic: modern apartment
    Posted: 28 November 2005 at 8:45am

here is my modern apartment and my first attempt im not finished yet

 

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Quote Benito Replybullet Posted: 28 November 2005 at 12:58pm
I really like the sofa 
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Quote kallum Replybullet Posted: 28 November 2005 at 1:00pm

is tht it lol any room for improvement on any of it and is there anything else u think will look gd in the room

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Quote Brian the Great Replybullet Posted: 28 November 2005 at 1:56pm
Please, please, good people. Let's try to make a little more constructie posts with spelling/grammar and normal-sized smileys.

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The sofa looks real comfy. Whatever you do, keep it that way. I also like the techniques you used on the laptop and telephone.

What confuses me though, is that your table and lava-lamps(?) look way worse. The bubbles need highlights and a wee bit contrast. The table needs a little texture, IMO. Not really a point of critique as much as an opinion. I do recommend adding a highlight on the bottom two lines that are now coloured the same as the surface of the table.

Other than that, get a wallpaper and get that floor contrast or a texture. It really needs it.

There, a wee bit of precious C&C. Hope it helps you on improving.
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