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    Posted: 12 July 2006 at 1:44am
My apartment is too big to submit! how do you submit it?
 
Heres the pic!
 
 


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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 3:32am
Firstly, the background is black, and really should be transparent.
Second.. what is going on? Looks like a rather simple edit.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 5:28am
He saw himself and his sister is confused
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:23am
Needs plenty more work wertler, even if you do submit it i doubt it'll be accepted. You've used the template for the room, and the template for the people, with not much editing, and class it as your own. You really need to spend more time on it, making it original and interesting, and perhaps more obvious to what is going on.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 9:20am
OK. Any ideas?
 
here's an update!
 
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 10:34am
maybe you can re-work the walls to be original. Not just color wise. maybe a plant or two. Different clothing on the non-clone character. A floor rug. Know what I mean. Don't give up.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:18am
Update!
 
 
could someone please make some shrubery for me. I'm not very good.


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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:26am
"A SHRUBBERY!!!"
 
lol.
The point of the forum isn't really to do what you can't, rather, it's to improve what you can and ultimately enable you to do more.

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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:48am
well is there a tutorial on how to make "A SHRUBBERY"
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 1:41pm
The subtle message of my previous post read as follows:
 
     "SHOW US WHAT YA HAVE AND LET US TELL YA HOW TO FIX THE DANG THING!"
 
Thank you for your time and the toll this surely took on your legally favorable mental state.

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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2006 at 2:40pm
I'm only starting at pixel work but I'll give it a try!
 
 
I know I'm crap. I cant even draw 3d stuff!


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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:24am
It's called, in this case, isometric. And for the record, that's nothing like a shubbery.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2006 at 10:55am
practice, practice, practice my friend. and patience young padawan, you too can be a jedi. :P

Your apartment isn't bad, but all that's in it is a couple of people and some plants. Maybe add some stuff? Like some chairs or something? If he's cloned himself, you could make a mad scientist table with a bunch of potions!
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:07pm

If he cloned himself he wouldn't say "Your me!" now would he? 

But still I'll try.


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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:13pm
no.. he'd say "you're me!" as in "you are" as not in "your" as in the possessive form of saying something like "this is your balcony thread which will be closed soon if you don't begin trying to learn from your peers and update accordingly. It is my authority to do so if I don't see progress or if you continue to revive dead threads in the name of boredom"
see how it works?


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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2006 at 2:35pm
Here's an update
 
 
and btw I always get confused with shrubberys. are they bushes


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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:29am
Are you allowed to double post? well if you aren't I didn't know.
 
Anyway do you like this better. she has a pink dress and there is a rug but no poster.
 
C&C
 


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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:40am
where is it

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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:47am
there
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:40pm
The rug isn't on iso perspective at all. You need a tutorial on isometrics. I'd suggest this one here.
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Quote alkaline Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:44pm
What did you do to your image quality? Anyways yes everything needs to be isometric, I would also suggest using less saturated colors and put in more detail.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2006 at 1:15pm
wat about the other update? recognise the poster?
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2006 at 11:23am
someone pleas say sumthing!!!!
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2006 at 11:56am
What's there left to say at the moment? I'd suggest you first do something with the crits you already got.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 20 July 2006 at 12:38pm
k ill try that
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Quote mike2590 Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2006 at 1:00am
you should try to turn the "sister so that she is looking at her brother(s).  this should be difficult, but you will get it.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2006 at 12:54pm
m probabley not gonna update for a while so ill ask again. in my update does any1 recignise the poster?
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 21 July 2006 at 10:58pm
no one probably does. I don't see what difference it makes if someone does recognize it. Even if someone does recognize it, it doesn't make your piece any better. I'd work on the critiques and stop worrying about things like that.
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Quote Dra_chan Replybullet Posted: 24 July 2006 at 1:27pm
Originally posted by wertler

Are you allowed to double post? well if you aren't I didn't know.
 
Anyway do you like this better. she has a pink dress and there is a rug but no poster.
 
C&C
 


The carpet should follow the floor's direction in the lines, otherwise it looks like it's floating.
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Quote wertler Replybullet Posted: 25 July 2006 at 3:51am
oh sorry!
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 25 July 2006 at 4:56am
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oh sorry!

Lol, there's no need to say sorry. You should thank them for pointing it out to you and get to work on fixing it.
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