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Krakatoa
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Quote Krakatoa Replybullet Topic: First Joint - WIP
    Posted: 06 September 2006 at 1:37am
Hello!
 
This is my 1...2...3.... 2nd post. Hooray! Anyway, I am halfway through a room for the Joint. It's going to be just a plain apartment with bits and pieces on the big desk. I need some good ol' C&C and some ideas on what else to put on the desk. I think it's relatively decent... but that's my opinion. I have been doing pixel art months and seem to be getting good... but once again, that's for my viewers to decide.
 
 
I would ask for you to rate it out of ten, but it's not done yet.
 
EDIT: added a person.
EDIT2: made the screen on the TV better. Now it's not just a grey square.


Edited by Krakatoa - 06 September 2006 at 2:44am
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 06 September 2006 at 9:42am
Nice so far. I think the desk is too wide compared to the figure. The window could use a little bit of an indentation into the wall, they are too flat right now. As to what to put on the desktop just pile it on. Books, food, magazines, bottles, computer, game consoles, lamps, etc. While the walls look OK maybe a picture or poster on the wall will look good and break the planes. The desk drawers also seem to long. Break them into 4 drawers per side, or 6. Thats it for now. KUTGW
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Quote Krakatoa Replybullet Posted: 07 September 2006 at 12:15am
Thanks for the advice. I'll update this post as soon as I make the changes.
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Quote Pixel_Agent Replybullet Posted: 26 November 2006 at 11:20am
Maybe you can add a chair aswell and a few more windows 

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Quote Pieface Replybullet Posted: 26 November 2006 at 12:52pm
Please Pixel Agent don't bump older topics, allow them to be bumped by the creator if they need it 
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Quote volcom Replybullet Posted: 24 August 2007 at 5:39pm
the two red walls are to much of different shades, and the floor is just...green.
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 24 August 2007 at 11:25pm
volcom, don't bump old threads. The post right before yours said so, for crying out loud.
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