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Quote moggy Replybullet Topic: Mini Golf Joint
    Posted: 22 June 2005 at 8:43am

This is my first ever peice o serious pixel work and so far i am rely pleased

The room still needs alot of work and details on the walls. Also i will be adding a door somewhere.

Here it is so far and could anyone give me any ideas for detail on walls or something

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Quote sedgemonkey Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2005 at 10:38am

An interesting start... it'd be nice to see more gimmicky contraptions like windmills on the holes. 

Heh, the walls are definitely lacking. Maybe you could put some trophies on shelves or some paintings.  Also, adding a bit of texture to break up the solids would help a lot.  Just look at some of the existing rooms.

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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2005 at 8:21pm
that one middle line in the walls needs to be of a darker tone than the other two. Basic rules of iso. The floor tiles/whatever don't look lined up in any normal fashion... looks too random.
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Quote tamzqueen Replybullet Posted: 06 July 2005 at 6:24pm
Definately needs some clouds or something on the walls... or maybe a scenes of other mini golf holes. The blue is just too much. Other than that, great idea. I love mini golf
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Quote jujucece Replybullet Posted: 07 July 2005 at 1:03am
The idea is nice...

Like you said, walls need work. You could also add more details on the floor.
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Quote Zoomrix Replybullet Posted: 19 July 2005 at 6:55pm

Why is the guy facing the wall?

Overall the idea is nice. Keep going.

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Quote spymp3 Replybullet Posted: 22 July 2005 at 4:30pm
 i loved looking at it when it is ANIMATED
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Quote TakeOut Replybullet Posted: 28 July 2005 at 5:59pm
Add some scenery and something on the walls. Just buffer up those walls in general. I don't really think the blue looks nice. 
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Quote pangaru Replybullet Posted: 08 October 2005 at 4:56pm
Wow, looks cool!
I also think that you should add things, like a windmill.
Really, anything else would be cool.
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