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PÔKa
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Quote PÔKa Replybullet Topic: My Room for the joint
    Posted: 02 July 2005 at 9:10am


Hi everybody!
This is my room for "The Joint". I need your comments first I submit it.
So if you have any suggestions, I'd like to know them.
Mondo mondo, perche sei cosi tondo ?!
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 02 July 2005 at 9:11am
quite nice , how about some shadows??
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Quote sedgemonkey Replybullet Posted: 02 July 2005 at 12:16pm

Maybe you could add some color to the walls and some detail to the projection screen. Other than that this looks great.

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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:41pm

it would look cool if the projector was on and you could make the walls a little darker and draw the light beam from the projector to the screen... just some ideas, but if you don't want to make any more major changes, then it looks nice as it is. good job on all the details on the shelves

also, the bed could use some pillows



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Quote Saiklor Replybullet Posted: 03 July 2005 at 5:52pm
dude, there's a naked pixelman in your bed dude!
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Quote PÔKa Replybullet Posted: 05 July 2005 at 1:29am
A naked "pixelwoman" ! lol
Thanks for all your suggestions, I will probably rework my room first to submit it.
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Quote kiwidesign Replybullet Posted: 05 July 2005 at 2:30am

try to add some "volume" to your pixelwoman's breast, she really looks like a man!

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Quote Saiklor Replybullet Posted: 05 July 2005 at 4:50am
and maybe give her more obviously rounded shoulders?
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 05 July 2005 at 8:46pm
she looks dead is waht I think. Also, the ratio looks completely off. The computer des and, kitchen area are too small in comparison to the dude. And please, for the love of god, fix that "woman's" hair. She looks like she has dreadlocks or something
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