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Quote bugman Replybullet Topic: my first for the joint
    Posted: 18 November 2008 at 10:17pm
Hi, I decided to try doing something for the joint and came up with the idea for showing what is in between the ceiling and floor of two different apartments instead of what is in the actual room. Here is the picture:



I know it may lack some shadows but I figured these sort of spaces generally aren't brightly lit! Note that someone has lost a few coins in one area and a remote(!) in another area. On the far left I have shown the inside of the wall in the room, you can also see a slither of the in room wall on the right corner. Yes, there should be insulation but then it would be much less interesting!

And C & C is most welcome.


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2008 at 9:39am
Good idea but its not clearly expressed yet :/
The colors are too boring too.
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Quote bugman Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2008 at 3:11pm
Is this an improvement?



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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2008 at 4:05pm
no. In fact I find it to be a complete waste of a room for the joint. In fact I call it lazy. But that's just my opinion
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2008 at 7:11pm
Its not really doing much, artistically speaking.
Why not try all the stuff in the vertical walls too. Electrical, plumbing, money, rats, snakes even a body.
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Quote bugman Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2008 at 9:13pm
Thank you for the C & C. Here is the latest version, I added a lot of stuff to it.

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2008 at 6:27am
hmmm, I dunno.

You say you like circuit boards. Why not a circuit board room where chips and other items are used as furniture?
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Quote bugman Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2008 at 2:48pm
Originally posted by jalonso

hmmm, I dunno.

You say you like circuit boards. Why not a circuit board room where chips and other items are used as furniture?

Hmm, interesting idea, but I prefer to do circuits from above and I do want to do other things as well.
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Quote volcom Replybullet Posted: 29 December 2008 at 3:40pm
just saying, u cant see much with a roof XD.
I would say you also need to add alot to your 'circuit board'
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