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OMGLOLZORS
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    Posted: 02 May 2009 at 12:24pm
Hey... I'm OMGLOLZORS. I'm new here, and I've spent some time working on a piece to submit to the Joint (probably not very good!!!) I'd like some C+C (although preferably not too harsh) on my piece so I can see what I need to improve.



It's supposed to be a very small restaurant, for very small people... Yeah, it kinda sucks. But that's why I need help!


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2009 at 12:40pm
That's preyty nice, keep at it.
The table and chair are hard to see because the floor is not letting them be seen. Try grey or some blue instead and see. Play with that till the chair and table are visible.
When coloring the letters, remember that you are allowed to alter the template colors if you like.
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